Can you help me with Fictional Poem ideas?

Its actually good, anyone reading it once can clearly get the idea. But I think it needs a li'l bit of finishing touch to be more touchy, like the 1st and last paragraph has got perfect rhythms, but the paragraphs in between needs to be a bit more rhythmic too to make it more beautiful. Thats all what i think, u can keep it unchanged too if u like it this way. One thing I must say U got materials within u, keep d spirit up.... All d very Best........